Song for my poem again.
Published on September 29, 2005 By Death_By_Beebles In Poetry
You've finally made the realization
it makes things good
for high expectations
and all I can see
is suggestions of the past
and hints of the bluest seas.

Please don't fight back
that's what they want
and you can't have that
they're gaining on
your four point lead
and so it seems
you're lost in eternity.


Hold up, even if we're powerless
I can't sing, but I can give
a hug and blow a kiss
You'll know the deepest blues
when you stare at the sky
and have it stare back at you.

Please don't fight back
that's what they want
and you can't have that
they're gaining on
your four point lead
and so it seems
you're lost in eternity.

Or is it me
that you are lost in?

I admit that I am quite the puzzle.


Please don't fight back
that's what they want
and you can't have that
they're gaining on
your four point lead
and so it seems
you're lost in eternity.


Bold indicates a chorus. Italics indicates spoken word.


Chorus rhyme scheme and rhythm inspired by the songs "Bruised" and and "I'm Ready" by Jack's Mannequin.

Comments
on Oct 03, 2005
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