Dedicated to Amanda for her birthday
Published on September 27, 2005 By Death_By_Beebles In Poetry
Good morning light,
the shining hits the lake
and sends this brilliant
waves of light and
sound every way.

And you can tell,
that its only this
beautiful for a special
person, as if
they were the only one meant
to see it.

And I glimpsed it
if only for half a second.

And I wanted to tell
you, special person,
thank you.
Thank you for letting me see
your sunshine.

Comments
on Sep 28, 2005
Thank you for letting me see
your sunshine.


If you give me a dollar, then I'll let you see my sunshine.

Sorry...I couldn't resist. Seriously though, beautiful poem....and I'm thinking it's to a beautiful girl, but you never tell me anything.
Well, all in good time, I suppose.

~Zoo
on Sep 28, 2005
Very nice, understated and more confident. Good work, shalom