Published on September 19, 2005 By Death_By_Beebles In Poetry
There is no telling
when this storm will
abate
so until then I'll weave
a little story here
and hope to pass the time.

I'll write this
Easy-Mac poetry
stir up the words, add water
perhaps I'll make something amazing

The rain pours down outside
the leaves float
among willow winds

And I am reminded of the tears
I once cried,
and of the pieces of myself
I had to collect

The rain hurt for a long time
the remembering
was as bad as the rebuilding
and the rain hurt
hurt so bad

Someone asked me today why
I was always so happy
I told them
I am happy because
the rain doesn't hate me
anymore.


Comments
on Sep 19, 2005
yeah al! way to go easy mac!
on Sep 19, 2005
Just for you kiddo!
on Sep 20, 2005
very nice feel Moskowitz
on Sep 20, 2005
I ditto the very nice sentiment Beebes!
on Sep 20, 2005
Awww....I like this very much, Al...you need to fill me in on what you've been doing lately....

~Zoo
on Sep 20, 2005
Hey Alex, I don't know your email and you don't get on your screen name so I thought I would leave you a quick note here! I love you, I miss you and your smiling face! I tried calling on Sunday..but when ever you get a chance. I'm around!
on Sep 21, 2005
You are talented Alex! You're so awesome with detail, I like that. I even love the idea of rain not hating me anymore or even at all! (insert the DA heart here)
on Sep 22, 2005
nice one al... i like personification... it's one of my personal favorites!

Capt. over and out!
on Sep 27, 2005
You are talented Alex! You're so awesome with detail, I like that. I even love the idea of rain not hating me anymore or even at all! (insert the DA heart here)


Stella, you're awesome!
on Sep 27, 2005
nice one al... i like personification... it's one of my personal favorites!


I'm glad you do! This is one of my favorites too