Published on September 8, 2005 By Death_By_Beebles In Poetry
It's so complicated
amazingly beautiful
just to see you
standing together

I have no clue how
you came to be
but fireworks seem dull
when I look at your eyes

Gravity doesn't fail, but
you seem to make
each other fly
amazing really

And however things got this way
the raging forest fire you
started
I wonder if it will burn long enough

to make the new trees grow?

Comments
on Sep 08, 2005

I enjoyed the read.

Trinitie

on Sep 08, 2005
great poem Al! really love reading your material these days... its so awesome
~Liv
on Sep 08, 2005
I enjoyed the read.


Thank you.
on Sep 08, 2005
great poem Al! really love reading your material these days... its so awesome


Awww... thanks Liv!
on Sep 09, 2005
Hmm, I'm curious as to what inspired this.....it's very good.

¡Muy Bueno!

~Zoo
on Sep 09, 2005
I'm also curious as to what inspired this. VERY good poem, Al! I love it! One of my favorites!!

~Band Girl~
on Sep 10, 2005
Hmm, I'm curious as to what inspired this.....it's very good.¡Muy Bueno!~Zoo


Inspired by life, I suppose. Thanks big guy!
on Sep 10, 2005
I'm also curious as to what inspired this. VERY good poem, Al! I love it! One of my favorites!!


Awww, thank you!