The spring of green eyes

Published on September 4, 2005 By Death_By_Beebles In Poetry

Please come out of the
storm, the turbulence
let the world see
your beautiful face.

clouds and rain
are no way
to live life

so, soon,
I pray for you
and

I hope that one day
you get caught up
lost in
the spring of green eyes.

Comments

Zoologist03

on Sep 04, 2005

Oh, that is so sweet, Al.

It's a great poem...

~Zoo

Death_By_Beebles

on Sep 04, 2005

Thanks Shaun! I'm glad you liked it!

Trudygolightly

on Sep 04, 2005

Very sweet, and this comes from your heart yes?

Death_By_Beebles

on Sep 04, 2005

Very sweet, and this comes from your heart yes?

Yes, it does. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Livsunshine

on Sep 06, 2005

ooh... Al's got a crush! hmm, hmm, hmm~ (wondering...)
lol but neways, its a great poem, man!
~Liv

Buddah Moskowitz

on Sep 06, 2005

I like the confidence that your writing is acquiring.

Well done.

manda

on Sep 07, 2005

I really like this one. especially the last phrase.. it's cool

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