Eddies in the Flow

Published on August 28, 2005 By Death_By_Beebles In Poetry

Waist down, waste away
caught in torrents
eddies in the flow
pulling hope life love
happiness pain fear

fear

Like a whirlpool, catching
the unaware in
drowning power
chaotic, destructive
that is the power
of the hate you hold.

Comments

Zoologist03

on Aug 29, 2005

Hmmm....well, well...your genius never fails to impress me, Al.

Great job!

~Zoo

Death_By_Beebles

on Aug 29, 2005

I don't think it's genius, more like 6% dumb luck and 94% improv.

Zoologist03

on Aug 29, 2005

I don't think it's genius, more like 6% dumb luck and 94% improv.

Ah...the recipie for the government...

~Zoo

Death_By_Beebles

on Aug 29, 2005

Sweet... that's quality right there.

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