Published on August 4, 2005 By Death_By_Beebles In Poetry
I know you think you're right in all this,
but look at the facts for a minute.
You tell me how my poems lack emotions,
yet you aren't even a poet.

Oh, you pretend to be one,
you slop your words down on paper,
pronounce it amazing
the dribble that it is
And tell me that I couldn't write to save my soul.

I wish you'd shut up for a moment
and just reread the sentence,
where your whorish ambitions are stowed,
I know the truth here,
It's plain to see

You're looking for something to call your own.

Comments
on Aug 04, 2005
Great writing.
on Aug 04, 2005
Thank you!
on Aug 04, 2005
Hmm, interesting...I'm wondering who brought on this little bit....

Quite good, by the way,
~Zoo
on Aug 04, 2005
Hmm, interesting...I'm wondering who brought on this little bit....

Quite good, by the way,


Thanks big man.

Not much brought it on, really. Just felt like I had to say it.

on Aug 05, 2005
I like it, Beebles. I think you should put it to music. I think you have the makings of a good song there.
on Aug 10, 2005
Beebeleh - good acrid stuff - get angry and stay there! Shalom