Published on July 21, 2005 By Death_By_Beebles In Poetry
I’ve lost something in this silence,
it feels like nothing is the same,
I don’t know what will be coming,
I don’t know a thing. I don’t know a thing.

Give me, just enough to pass on,
I don’t know why I need it,
Oh God I wish I knew. I wish.
I could see the light in the tunnel's end.

I’ve never seen a shooting star,
I’ve heard that they bring hope,
if I could see it in one moment,
perhaps I’d have what I’ve looked for.

Nothing seems right, oh no, nothing
I can’t figure it out, I feel so... I fell.
I fell down, and can’t get up, please
shine your starlight into this pitfall.

Sometimes the smallest wish comes true,
amongst the grandest schemes,
I wish that you are happy,
I wish that you feel alive.

Alive is such a wonderful thing to feel.



By the way, it's good to see the blogs back up.

Comments
on Jul 21, 2005
amen, beebles.


Amen indeed! Thank you for dropping by!
on Jul 21, 2005
This is definately a great piece and for that I applaud you.

Excellent to the nth power!

~Zoo
on Jul 21, 2005
Hi - I'm not sure what the title means. It's good but seems a little disconnected - or maybe I am.
on Jul 21, 2005
Hi - I'm not sure what the title means. It's good but seems a little disconnected - or maybe I am.


I've Lost Something refers to the first line of the poem. It refers to loosing your way, loosing hope, loosing sense of being. At the same time, the end offers the hope that some wishes come true, and that being alive, through all its trials and tribulations, is a beautiful thing.