i have absolutly no idea what that means. BUT, i thought it was pretty. So there ya go. And I like the title.

a lot of the unbalancing in this world could be for a number of reasons too. People have different needs and show different emotions that they feed off of. And depending on their moods they may need to have a piece a chocolate or take meds to get them balanced again!

Thank you for reading it, even if you didn't understand.

It's about the way I feel about people I guess. People are so strange, and can be so cold, cruel, dramatic, and a whole host of bad things. At the same time, people are amazing, and can be beautiful and loving, caring and compassionate. Just as the Earth is not balanced in it's rotation, as it tilts to both sides as it spins, neither is any of its occupants. And, I guess just everone else gets sick of people every once in a while (that's the sick to the stomach part).

Does that help?

a lot of the unbalancing in this world could be for a number of reasons too. People have different needs and show different emotions that they feed off of. And depending on their moods they may need to have a piece a chocolate or take meds to get them balanced again!

Very true. Plus, chocolate always makes me happy. A very insightful response. Thanks!

Theres no need to boast about my poetry and my fans sweety they exist. the only thing thats sad is your poetry... As for labelling my poetry under the writing section well I am an individual and I want to be different, I will do it as I want and as I please
As for signing up as an anonymous user I have better things to do than waste my time on being popular and i write poetry not for fame or fortune but for the love of it...

As your intro says a boy growing into a man for now you just do that, thankyou for your critisism its highly appreciated but un called for!!!!
Best you work on your writing skills... And control that jealousy of yours I cant help it if I am abetter poet than you are, maybe if you ask nicely I might just help you express yourself

By the way Host Europe just sponsored me my own website for my poetry because even they think its great its still under construction but should be complete by the middle of july its www.it3pr.com

And one more thing if you dont like the comments people post or my poetry i suggest you dont visit my site

All the best with your writing hope to see your success soon

All the best with your writing hope to see your success soon

A very nice thing to say after everything else you said was quite... well, you know.

That's nice of you to call me a writer who needs to work on my skills. It's too bad the rest of your message is so flagrantly... well constructed. How ironic.

It's about the poetry, and not you. If you can't take the heat, get out of the kitchen.

Well seeing as i am never in the kitchen there is no heat, maybe most of my fans are anonymous because i chat on the internet quite often and the one thing i think that is most interesting about me is that i write poetry and i give people that i chat to insight on me when i give them my joeuser details therefore they are anonymous!!!!!!!!

But no sweat you can diss me all you like see thats the difference between you and I...

Oh by the way the comment before yours was deleted mistakely when i was trying to get rid of yours, i dont appreciate negative publicity well actually i dont want it...
I never said your writing was bad and by commenting on working on your writing skills i meant do what you do best write and leave me out of it...

P.s I would rather be a poet than be famous!!!!!!!!